The Agent
"what brings you here my friends?"asked bob"crime reasons." I said simply. as I pulled out a wad of thousand dollar bills ( bob looked very happy)followed by a gun (his expression turned upside down)" and you are under arrest for black market trading, murder and piracy!!" bob was fast he got into sprinting position, but I was faster pulling out my gun and putting two bullets in his legs later he was taken to prison and I was awarded a medal.
By Joshua barnes
Hello Joshua,
ReplyDeleteI love how you really se your imagination in your writing - there was quite a bit of action here too! Well done.
Please remember to check your work carefully for punctuation. Sentences and names need capital letters.
keep up the good work!
Mrs S.